Mrs. V.
11/24/2015 04:25:34 pm
Operation Pucker UP By Rachele Alpine
Mrs. V.
11/24/2015 04:26:38 pm
Sheradan,
Riley Taylor
11/30/2015 05:37:24 pm
MRS. V.
11/30/2015 09:10:53 pm
Cute responses. So what is your Theme? Where is your secret Number?
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:15:23 pm
Nice Job Sheradan. Where is your secret number? How is the theme of your book first kiss? What does that mean? Is there a lesson in there like "Everybody needs a first kiss" or "first kiss or you are a loser"?
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 03:05:36 pm
Good explanation of your book. The choice of your theme is not exactly right. First Kiss would be an event but not a message from the author. How about Having patience? That would be a better choice.
Quinn Bradley
11/26/2015 09:51:17 am
Flora & Ulysses
Dawson #21
11/29/2015 06:04:22 pm
I think you should make your book blog longer so it seems more interesting
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:26:03 pm
Quinn,
Orion #24
11/28/2015 01:27:54 pm
Diary of a Wimpy Kid #8
Riley
11/30/2015 05:42:59 pm
Orion I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove that book
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:23:50 pm
Orion,
Ben Airmet
11/28/2015 04:22:57 pm
Of Giants And Ice
Ben
11/28/2015 04:25:01 pm
Sorry they have a mean substitute teacher.
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:29:06 pm
Good fix. Thanks. What is the theme? It seems like you might have wanted to say something else, but got tired of it and just stopped. It feels unfinished.
Boston!!
11/29/2015 08:10:21 am
The Indian in the Cupboard
Ben
11/29/2015 06:01:29 pm
I was gunna do that book. I seen the movie
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:31:48 pm
BEN!!! - I seen the movie? Seriously, you want to say that? That is a subject-verb agreement problem.
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 03:03:08 pm
Boston,
Leo Jensen
11/29/2015 12:39:29 pm
Holes
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:38:01 pm
Leo,
Gus Jensen
11/29/2015 01:03:20 pm
Stormbreaker
Dawson #21
11/29/2015 05:27:27 pm
Cool, Gus, but I think it should have a bit punch into it because I wasn't right like, I should read that!
caden renfro
11/29/2015 06:55:42 pm
good job it looks great
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:42:58 pm
Gus,
Dawson .W #21
11/29/2015 06:04:33 pm
Title: FireStar's Quest
caden renfro
11/29/2015 06:54:51 pm
good job that was great
Mrs. V.
11/30/2015 09:48:55 pm
Dawson,
caden renfro
11/29/2015 06:54:11 pm
Title Michel Vey
Riley
11/30/2015 05:40:29 pm
I have read Micheal vey Caden. But I have a question : What book is it?
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 07:10:11 am
Caden,
Joshua Wagstaff
11/30/2015 07:32:21 am
The Boy in the Striped Pajamas
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 07:13:46 am
Well done Josh. However, I don't see where you've put your secret number or your theme. All your conventions look great. I'd have to give you a 2.
Ryan Richards
11/30/2015 03:42:09 pm
Book Title: Wonder
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 07:18:57 am
Well done Ryan! Your theme is perfect, your summary is great, and your sentence structure is very good. You need to watch your punctuation or lack of punctuation. You have one sentence that has a list, but not commas separating the list items. I can still give you a 3 but not a mastery.
brady
12/3/2015 01:29:23 pm
I'm lovin it.
Hailey Pope
11/30/2015 04:00:04 pm
Listening for Lucca
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 07:22:36 am
Wow Hailey - that sounds like an amazing book. I have been seeing it, but never wanted to pick it up. Now I do! Well done!!! Your theme fix perfectly for how you described the story. Mastery!
Dylin Stadig
11/30/2015 05:59:03 pm
Title: Warriors (Forest Of Secrets)
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 07:27:04 am
Wow Dylin, you have given a lot of information - too much information. A summary should be shorter and not give away too much of the plot.
Gavin Jensen
11/30/2015 06:47:13 pm
The Fantastic Secret of Owen Jester
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 09:52:07 am
Gavin,
samantha rich
12/17/2015 02:00:58 pm
did you mean to spell you amazing me or did you mean you amazed or amaze me
Lincoln Pocock
11/30/2015 08:02:49 pm
I SURVIVED
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 02:56:34 pm
Good summaries of the stories. I've never heard of the wave of molasses. I'll have to look that up. I am confused on the theme. I didn't find anything you marked as "Theme" but there is the one sentence at the beginning that sounds like you were trying to tell the theme. So you theme could be to "Don't give up, even in impossible situations." or "Keep trying". This will be scored as a 3 but not mastered.
Abbie Keys
11/30/2015 08:05:26 pm
I survived the terrorist attacks of 2001
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 03:16:23 pm
Hey Abbie, 11/30/2015 08:31:00 pm
Harry Potter lives with his mean Aunt and Uncle and their spoiled son, Dudley. They never let him do anything that involves any active things.
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 03:20:08 pm
Sam,
Belle Eaton
11/30/2015 08:56:35 pm
Book Title: Where The Mountain Meets The Moon
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 03:25:17 pm
Belle,
samantha rich
12/17/2015 01:57:52 pm
good job belle didn't we read this in third grade or were you not there
Hayes Thompson
11/30/2015 09:22:41 pm
Title: Holes
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 03:36:12 pm
Hayes,
Kate Oliver
12/1/2015 07:47:25 am
Title: The Golden Crown
Maggie
12/1/2015 08:37:05 pm
The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle
Tristan Pedersen
12/2/2015 08:53:18 pm
The book I read was called Diary of a Wimpy Kid Unplugged, written by Jeff Kinney. In the book Greg's parents are always telling him that it was so much better back in the day because every body was much more socilized. So of course his mom starts a petition and every body signed it so the whole town has to go technology free. Everybody decided to use their time wisley. They go down to the town park and help clean up. So when all of them are working their buttts of, these girl scouts show up and start organizing everything.They woudn't even let anyone go to the bathrom. So after that's all done they go home and his parents go on a trip. Greg is stuck with his grandpa all weekend. His dad was really worried because when they came home one time they found out that his grandpa threw a huge party. So his dad put in a security camera. So now Greg can't have any friends over. Now in the book Greg wakes up and goes to the bathroom to brush his teeth. He get's out the tooth paste but when he opend it up he dropped the lid into the sink. Then when he tries to fix it,but the water starts leeking on to the kithchen. Greg goes to school and he finds out that there is a camping trip. Normally he would not want to go because it says "technology free". Then he thinks that his dad will notice the patch in the wall, so he decides to go!!! The Adventure Awaits Him.
Matt
12/3/2015 01:20:35 pm
I already wanted to read that book, now I want to read it even more!
Mrs. V. for Ethan Lake
12/3/2015 08:31:29 am
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 08:39:45 am
Wow Ethan,
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 03:27:33 pm
Ethan,
Mrs. V. for Matt Sly
12/3/2015 08:33:25 am
Star Wars a New Hope:
Mrs. V.
12/3/2015 08:42:59 am
Matt, you continue to impress me with your awesome abilities. I love the way you set this up! I love the intro you gave. Everything about it is great! I HAVE to give you a mastery.
Cameron Anderson
12/3/2015 01:17:44 pm
Ten Ways To Make My Sister Disappear
Megan Scharman
12/3/2015 09:12:17 pm
Author: Sharon Creech
Megan scharman
12/3/2015 09:14:52 pm
Sorry! I forgot the title! It's The Wanderer
samantha rich
12/17/2015 01:52:17 pm
no you didn't it is right at the top
Megan scharman
12/3/2015 09:18:12 pm
Title: The Wanderer
samantha rich
12/17/2015 01:49:48 pm
I loved it I think you did a great job
Brady V.
12/12/2015 12:20:29 pm
Foxcraft
Elle relyea
12/16/2015 07:44:11 pm
name: elle relyea
samantha rich
12/17/2015 01:48:09 pm
great job elle you convinced me and now I want to read the book and where did you get the book
samantha rich
12/17/2015 01:46:22 pm
The Battlefield Ghost
samantha rich
12/17/2015 01:53:23 pm
I forgot to put the theme it is mystery Comments are closed.
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